Senin, 19 November 2018

Complaint Letter and Application Letter


1.      Complaint Letters
A Complaint Letter is a type of letter written to address any type wrong doing, offence, grievance, resentment arising out of a product, service etc. Complaint Letters are used to raise your concerns about unfair things and seek a productive outcome. They are also used to vent out your pent up emotions arising out of your suffering or bad experience. It is a fundamental right and duty of a citizen to seek justice arising out of any injustice, which is initiated by a Complaint. Complaint letters then, become your First Step towards your Consumer Rights. They inspire other hassled consumers, influence the concerned authorities towards taking proper action and make the defaulters more liable, responsible and responsive. This is because unresponsive behaviour of the offender is liable to a Punishable Court Proceeding or an Expensive Lawsuit.
Writing complaints letters is an essential responsibility of the victim whilst seeking positive outcomes. Complaint Letter writing is not only a pre-warning for the offender but also a chance for them to rectify their act in time. These letters are not just meant for defective productsservice they can also be written towards any injustice happening in the society, like Smoking in Public’, ‘Misuse of Water by any Person or an Organisation’ and any issue happening in society which needs to be addressed. 
Anyone can complaint through letter if there is a legitimate reason. Anyone can write a letter to the administration regarding the pollution, water supply, traffic problems, shortage of electricity etc. You don’t need to be a lawyers or an influential person. All you need to do is to learn to write a complaint letter in an appropriate manner with all the relevant information included. In the matter contained here, you will get all the tips to write a complaint letter.
Types of Complaint Letters
Complaint letters are of different types and different reasons and depending upon that they can be categorised accordingly.
Depending on the level of an organisation or an individual these can be:
1.      Personal Complaint Letters 
When a letter is written at a personal level by an individual it is called as Personal Complaint Letter. These are written by consumers to get refund, replace a product etc.  These are also written for grievances’ regarding a service or any issue affecting the individual or society at large.
2.      Professional Complaint Letters
When a letter is written on behalf of an organisation it is called known as Professional Complaint Letter. These letters have the backing of an organisation and are mostly related to professional items and services.
Complaint Letter Samples :
·       Product Complaint Letter

Example For An Complaint Letter :
PT. DUTA SANDIWARA INTERNASIONAL
Jln. Armada Timur Satu No.22
Ujung Pandang 10003
Sulawesi Selatan
23rd July, 1993

Mr. Paul R.Halim
Marketing Manager
PT. Jakarta Electronic
23 Jln. Mangga Lima Raya
Jakarta 20001

Dear Mr. Halim,
We regret to have to complain about late delivery of the television we ordered from you on 22 June. Although you had given us a guarantee in delivery within 2 weeks, we didn’t receive them until yesterday.
Unfortunaetely, there has been a smilar delay on the previous occasion and this compels us to say that business between us cannot be continued in such a bad condition.
We have felt in necessary to make our feelings known since we cannot give reliable delivery dates to our customers unless we can count on undertakings given by our suppliers.
We hope you will understand how we are placed and that from now we can rely upon punctual completion of our orders.

Yours sincerely,

Riyanto Sugandha
Purchase Manager

Question About Complaint Letter :
1.      Why did Mr. Riyanto send the letter?
               Answer : Delay in receipt of goods

2.      When did they order the televisions?
Answare : On 22 June
3.      Have they received their order?
Answer : Haven't received it yet
4.      Who was the television for?
Answer : Customer
5.      Did they still want to continue business with PT. Jakarta Electronic?
Answer : Do not want to continue business with PT. Jakarta Electronic

2, Application Letters
 An application letter is a cover letter, a sales letter, and a marketing tool all in one and it should accompany a professional resume any time a person applies for a job.

            Its main objective is to get the applicant in the door for an interview and must be written well enough to attract the attention and interest of the person with the power to recommend or grant one.

            The scope should include compelling information that will convince the reader that the qualifications outlined in the resume are strong enough to make an applicant a candidate.
Identify Your Reader
 An application letter should be addressed to the person who is in charge of screening and hiring new employees. That person's name should be placed in the inside heading and salutation of your application. It should also be included on the top line of your envelope.

            Remember that people do business with people first, businesses second. When you address your reader by name, you recognize their individual importance and value as a human being.


Establish Your Objective
 The objective of an application letter is to attract the attention of an employer. It acts as a cover letter for your resume and should provide enough personal information to convince the reader to grant you an interview.

            The qualifications you provide a potential employer should be included on your resume. Your cover letter should indicate that you are a suitable candidate and attract attention to your resume.

Determine Your Scope

The scope of your application letter should include those things that are specific to obtaining your objective - convincing the reader to grant you an interview. You should be brief, but include such things as:
  • A specific job title
  • A desired area of employment
  • Source of job lead
  • Educational background
  • Work experience
  • Leadership activities
  • Specialized training
Remember, you are requesting an interview. Specify times at which you are available and the methods by which you can be contacted.

Organize Your Letter

 Organizing your application letter will establish a logical order in which to present your information. You have already begun this task by establishing an objective and determining your scope. Refer back to them. Together they include much of the content that will become the body of your letter.

            A simple outline will get you organized. Begin by creating a list of points that your letter will address and put them in the sequential order that will best help your reader comprehend your application. These points will become the backbone of your draft; your outline will become a checklist.

Draft Your Letter

 Working from an outline is the simplest way to draft an application letter. You have already organized yourself by creating a list. Refer back to it and turn each fragment into a full and complete sentence expressing a single thought or idea.

            In order that your thoughts and ideas are conveyed in a cohesive manner, write in as natural a sounding voice as possible. Try writing your draft quickly and then read it out loud. Concentrate on communicating your objective to your reader. Make sure that the scope of your letter contains all the relevant information included in your organizational list.

Keep in mind that you are writing a rough draft. For the moment you can ignore spelling, grammar, punctuation, sentence and paragraph structure. Those are technical details that you will pay attention to in the final step when you review and revise your work.

Close Your Letter

 An application letter should close in a professional manner. Once your last paragraph is written, sign off between a complimentary close such as "Sincerely," or "Thank you," and your printed name.

            If you are writing in conjunction with an official duty, place your title below your printed name. Additional information such as dictation remarks, notification of attachments, enclosures and copies sent to other individuals should be placed beneath the title line.
Review and Revise Your Application Letter
            Reviewing and revising the draft of your application letter is a final inspection, a last check to see whether your objective is clearly stated and your scope concisely defined. Put yourself in the reader's shoes and ask whether the details are accurate and complete.
            Look for obvious errors. Check for spelling, sentence structure and grammar mistakes. Your complaint should be direct and to the point, so make sure that you have used a strong active voice.
            Keep in mind the overall cohesiveness of your letter. Look for accuracy, clarity and a sense of completeness. Ask yourself if the transitions between paragraphs are working and if your point of view, tone and style are consistent throughout the text.
            Examine your word choices carefully. Ambiguous words lead to confusion. Jargon and abstract terms may not be understood at all and affectations, cliches and trite language serve no real purpose and will obscure your objective.
 If you have not written an opening or a closing now is the time. The introduction should lead into the letter with a firm statement about the position or job you are seeking. The conclusion should provide your contact information.

Example For An Application Letter :
Jln. Museum Raya No. 3
Jakarta 10002

                                                                                                               February 14, 1993 

Mrs. Claudis Dresden
Mills Real Estate Ltd
14 Jln. Cassava Raya
Jakarta 12001

Dear Madame,
I would like to apply for the post of secretary that Mills Real Estate advertised in today’s Jakarta Times.
As you can see in my curriculum vitae, my education and work experience as personal secretary have given me excellent secretarial skills.
I enclose my curriculum vitae and would be glad to meet you for an interview any day after 20 February.
I look forward to hearing from you.

Your faithfully                  

Linda R. Smith

 Enc Curriculum Vitae

Question About Application Letter :
1.      What position was Linda R. Smith applying for?
Answer : Apply for a secretary position
2.      How did she know the vacancy at Mills Real Estate?
Answer : Advertising In Jakarta
3.      What did she enclose with her application letter?
Answer : Curriculum Vitae
4.      When would she be available for an interview?
Answer : Every day after February 20
5.      Where was the vacancy advertised?
Answer : In Jakarta


Senin, 12 November 2018

Inquiry Letter and Order Letter


1.      LETTER OF INQUIRY

Inquiry Letter is a letter written to request information and/or ascertain its authenticity. A letter of inquiry deals with various matters like job vacancies, funding, grants, scholarships, projects, sales, pre-proposals and others. The term is common in various business setups as it implies fund request or pre-proposal information. Owing to this usage, the term may be considered exclusive to these setups alone. But that is not the case, to this effect the below definition offers a justified meaning.Format of a Letter of Inquiry

Follow this format in writing a letter of inquiry:
  1. In the first paragraph, identify yourself and, if appropriate, your position, and your institution or firm.
  2. In the second paragraph, briefly explain why you are writing and how you will use the requested information. Offer to keep the response confidential if such an offer seems reasonable.
  3. List the specific information you need. You can phrase your requests as questions or as a list of specific items of information. In either case, make each item clear and discrete.
  4. Conclude your letter by offering your reader some incentive for responding.
As for the things contained in the letter of inquiry is everything related to important information about an item from a company (seller), among others:
        Sample/pattern of product (contoh barang untuk mengetahui qualitas/mutu barang)
        Price
        Catalogue
        Pricelist
        Quantation
        Terms of payment
        Terms of delivery
        Delivery time
        Deadline
        Method of dispatch/ transport/delivery)







Example of An Inquiry Letter :
Text Box: PT. MULTI SAFARI INTERNATIONAL
Jln. Jend, Sudirman NO.15
Surabaya 20002
 



Text Box: Ref:AA/NA/12A
21 st October,1993

Johnson Allwood & Sons 
25 Bridgestone Street 
New York,NY 239001
USA

Dear Sirs,
We have seen some of your excellent men’s belts products exhibited at world Expo in New York last week. As we are interested in your Belly men’s belts, would you pleased send us your latest catalogues, price-list and terms of payment.
We appreciate your prompt reply.

Yourfaithfull,

Anwar S.Abdulla
Purchase Manager
 
















Question about Inquary Letter :
1.      Who is the purchase Manager of PT. Multi Safari International?
Answer : Anwar S.Abdulla

2.      Where did Mr. Abdullah see the products of johnson Allwood & Sons?
Answer : At world Expo in New York

3.      Where was the World Expo Held?
Answer : New York

4.      What did Mr.Abdullah ask for in his letter?
Answer : Request to send catalogs, price lists and the latest payment terms

5.      What are the products of Johnson Allwood & Sons?
Answer : Some male belt products



2. ORDER LETTER
Order letter/Placing order is a document or letter that confirms the details of a purchase of goods or services from one party to another. Example when we will buy some product in a company, we must send order letter for request that product and when the recipient in that company receives this letter, they will process the order and send the product.
         An Order Letter is the one that is written by the person/company placing the request of purchase from another company. This letter comes into action only when a detailed study of the desired product has been done in the market and based on promised service, quality and price of the product, a decision for a purchase has been made.
 An Order Letter should be drafted very carefully as it needs to pen down all the terms and conditions of the purchase for the benefit of both involved parties.
Things to be aware when writing a order letter :
·         An Order Letter should be addressed to the person responsible for executing the order
·         include all the terms and conditions agreed upon by both involved parties
·         Since it is purely an official letter it should be typed out
·         There is no need to use too many adjectives in the letter since it is purely for an order being placed
·         The letter should have all rtelevant details related to the order, for example, quantity, price and other terms and conditions






Example of An Order Letter :

PT. SUSI SUSANTI SETIAWAN
Road. Citralestari No. 14 Cianjur 4325
Phone : 081912025006 E-mail : nu9eulis@yahoo.com

20 July, 2013

No                   : 123/CB/VII/2013
in terms of       : Mail Order Items
attachment      :  -
Dear,
leadership PT. MUSRNI SUPPLIER
Road. Cendana Barat No. 11 Jakarta
With Respect,
Given our inventory dwindling, so we intend to order the following items :

No.
Name of Goods
Total
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
Cooking oil
Kerosene
Chicken eggs
Bath soap Lifeboy
Clear Shampoo
Paper quarto
Flag milk
100 bottles
50 bottle
2 cartons.
500 pcs
400 bottles
4 ring
60 bottle

The goods on our message we hope will soon be sent no later than 4 days after we receivedthis letter is received.
So we made this letter, for your attention and cooperation we would like to thank.


Sincerely,
PT. SUSI SUSANTI SETIAWAN


Susi Susanti
leadership 











Question about Order Letter :
1. what items are ordered?
Answer : -Cooking oil
   -Kerosene
   -Chicken eggs
   -Bath soap Lifeboy
   -Clear Shampoo
   -Paper quarto
   -Flag milk

2. How long is the shipment desired by PT.Susi Susanti Setiawan?
Answer :  4 Days

3. Where does PT Susi order the item?
Answer : At PT. MUSRNI SUPPLIER Road. West Sandalwood No. 11 Jakarta

4, what date the letter was sent?
Answer : On July 20, 2013

5, how many units of cooking oil are ordered?


Answer : There are 100 bottles of cooking oil
 

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